Sunday, November 7, 2010

Original Limerick

Pie

A beautiful pie with whip cream as lace
Is thrown at someone with a fair 'mount of pace.
  The duck down low,
  Just missing the blow.
But it would be funnier if it smoked them in the face.
-Patrick Mavety


Explication

This a short limerick with a rythme scheme aabba. It was about a pie getting thrown at someones face. I wrote this because I think it is hilarious if someone is hit in the face with a pie. This relates to my topic because I didn't just want to talk about food, but also some funny things that are associated with food. Enjoy.

1 comment:

  1. Who said that food is only used for eating? Pat, way to switch it up. I love the cynical line "But it would be funnier if it smoked them in the face." good job!

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