-Patrick I hope that everyone can see the fork, knife, and plate. This poem is about setting the table. I wanted to do a poem about that because it seems small but it is important. It is also probably a relatable topic because many people have had to set the table in their life. The poem is made up of rhyming couplets that form each utensil and plate.
Slightly confusion to read, but each individual line has a distinctive couplet line that has a good chime to it. Very innovative.
ReplyDeleteThis is really creative and visually interesting. Also I love that there is an actual rhyme scheme, you did a really great job!
ReplyDeletei really liked this poem pat! it flows really well with the rhyming couplet and the why that you made the words go around was very easy to read. great work!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great poem! I love how it's shaped like a fork, knife, and plate! And this was my favorite line,
ReplyDelete"Then the children do not meet, the requirements allowed to eat!"
A fantastic line which shows the importance to setting the table. And I love your header picture, that guy really loves his food!
WOAH! I think that you did a fantastic job on this poem. It is clear that the words form a table setting. And agreeing wtih niccolo that header picture gave me a good laugh. Great blog pat!
ReplyDeleteI love how creative this poem is. This was especially moving for me because it incorporates two of my favourite things: forks and children
ReplyDeletegreat job
A pretty ingenious idea, and not a shabby poem either! Great job!
ReplyDeleteDefinitely going to think of this little bit of wit next time I set my table.